lustigRaul's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[random tutorial for noobs]

Nice tutorial

I liked it, and I liked the bouncy ball XD it was entertaining. But they only thing I didn't liked is that you didn't explained the AS. Those action scripts are simple and you should explain them. That's all ^_^

mrkewl responds:

i did explain the 'drag' code but point taken

[Basic AI tutorial]

Very nice tutorial, just try to add some music

Tutorial was excellent, and that anime girl was very well done. You made an excellent tutorial. This is advanced, right? I ask this because I saw no beginner explanation. Well, anyways, I liked the demonstrations. Good Work! Keep up doing those tutorials ; ) well done.

Zimius responds:

i sure will

[Disc game]

Very good.

I liked the game, but there was no music XP. I got bored. Other than that, everything is fine.

[Square Madness]

cool :D

It would be more tricky if the black square made you grow, then you would've have less opportunity to dodge the red squares. :D
It was pretty cool.

[6 random shit games]

good :D

The koopa and picachu part was annoying though XD

mothballs responds:

Actually it was goomba and pikachu, but thanks for the review, dude!

[-Cannon Blaster-]

very good :D

The game was very original (never seen anything like this before). I think I saw the last one and it didn't worked. But this changes everything. Just try putting some instructions cause at first I didn't knew what was I supposed to do. But I did it XD nice video. Keep up the good work :)

[LOZ: Target Smash]

Very good! ^_^

The game was very good, and the idea of making those circle vanish over time was excellent. It is very tricky and is an excellent game that must not leave newgrounds.
BTW, my link dissappeared when in the main menu I made him go outside the window XD I think he felt somehow... and never came back again. Try to fix that by putting a wall. Also I liked the bonus mad-lib. Man, this game is very very very good.
Just try adding more sound effects. That's all.

JCesta responds:

i had him doing his signature link scream, but it got annoying

[TheExtreme Stick Tutorial]

Extremely Well :D

I understood everything perfectly, so good I could change the first music >_> I had my cpu in maximum volume, and I recognized the SMF song.
I learned a lot from your tutorial, I didn't knew how to make cool blood effects XP. This tutorial is the best :P
If you had a little movie included there that involves all of the effects, it would be an extraordinary example and the tutorial would be invinsible XP
Try making one little movie that includes all those effects and stick recommendations you gave. Keep up the excellent work.

[All-In-One Tutorial 2]

put some examples

It was good, but why didn't you put some more examples. And correct me if Im wrong but in the video description it said "clay", but the video has no clay tutorials! In the action script, how do I know if I like the script when I don't even know where to put it or how should it look like. Sorry man, but you need to put more examples.