lustigRaul's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wegra Adventure 2]

o_o

Okay, I couldn't understand anything that narrator was saying. Besides that the drawings were mostly pictures, and at the end, I couldn't read anything. I recommend you doing this:

Make animations- I know this will take a while, but great flash videos that everyone loves are not made in one week, it takes months.

Put buttons- This is very simple, just look at a button tutorial and add buttons. This should be no problem.

Make the narrator talk slower and clearly- Even though I talk and understand english, I couldn't understand what the narrator was saying (not to mention that it was Sam). Also add some music or sfx and fx.

That's all I recommend for now. Keep working and don't give up. I'm sure you will make a better flash video next time. :D

Wegra responds:

Hopefully you'll be a little happier with Wegra Adventure 4.

[mother's day flash]

very good :)

It was very good, I liked the animation, especially the basketball one. This is very good, and had sfx! XD
Very good man, this is very cool.

CARDBOARDBOX3R responds:

thanks for the nice review...they're hard to find these days. =p

[The LiveSwif Tutorial]

cool

but I don't think most people have that...
and it does seems difficult...

PinballWizard976 responds:

Yeah, it can be difficult at times, but that's why I was trying to show people on what to do so they wouldn't flip out and not use it or something. Thanks for the review though!

[stick invasion]

Cool :)

It was cool and had little action. But what the hell does pacman has to do with stick figures? XD That pacman didn't do anything at all. Try animating more. Try making one where the camera is not moving too much. It will be easier to make a great animation.

ScrewedComedy responds:

thanx

[Alex's SE Tutorial]

Nice :)

It was really cool, but try adding "next" or "back" buttons so the viewer can review what he/she didn't understood. I liked the scene selection. The video was very good, I'll recommend it for the FLASH TUTORIALS collection. It would have more chances to go there if you had next and back buttons. See ya and keep up the good work :D

skykid10 responds:

Thanks for the Good Review, BUT DOES ANYONE KNOW WHAT A PLAY/PAUSE BUTTON IS!?!?